10 25 2014 EMCSA Update

WITHIN: Graded primarily on heat and narrative WITHOUT: Graded primarily on narrative Possible spoilers below … WITHIN The Dolls of Kelly Thompson (mc mf ff) (new)  by Bob Jowl --2/5 (so-so, maybe a good story to others but didn’t mesmerize me)-- The writing was generally polished, minus a couple glitches. However, the main character was … Continue reading 10 25 2014 EMCSA Update

Sept 27, 14 EMCSA Update

WITHIN: Graded primarily on heat and narrative WITHOUT: Graded primarily on narrative Possible spoilers below … WITHIN A New Town, a New Beginning (mc md mf ff in hm) (new)  by OpenlyJas --2/5 (so-so, maybe a good story to others but didn’t mesmerize me)-- “It was going to come good” is an awkward way to … Continue reading Sept 27, 14 EMCSA Update

9 20 14 EMCSA Update

WITHIN: Graded primarily on heat and narrative WITHOUT: Graded primarily on narrative Possible spoilers below … WITHIN Nine to Hive (mc ff mf fd ft ma gr sf bd) (2 new chapters)  by Half Shim --4/5 (pretty good, not perfect but enjoyable)-- The starting dream sequence was a touch over the top, but still more … Continue reading 9 20 14 EMCSA Update

9 13 2014 EMCSA Update

WITHIN: Graded primarily on heat and narrative WITHOUT: Graded primarily on narrative Possible spoilers below … WITHIN Abby’s Ascention (mc ff mf fd gr ma sf) (new)  by effjoo --2.5/5 (not great, had some redeeming qualities)-- A gem that reshapes the protagonist and those around her? Sure, why not? While definitely polished, the start of … Continue reading 9 13 2014 EMCSA Update