Properly Handled (mc mf ff md fd in) by Extantelan
A brother and sister grow closer over a shared love of mind control and other various kinks and perversions.
Date Released: April 6, 2019
Beyond the IN tag, I greatly enjoy reading stories that shift perspective. I would not be the first to say that it can be difficult to do in a readable way, while there is not necessarily one way to do it. Splitting perspective between chaps is a more than fine method to keep everything clear! Anyway, the fact that these two have a surprisingly friendly relationship at the start technically makes this all feel a bit less extreme than it could have. More an observation via the brother’s perspective, but still notable. I’m also not sure if I would be shocked in the way Budda was, but then again us MC author’s might as well be showing off our fantastical fantasies! Ultimately, I found myself far more engaged in Bobbi’s side of the story. There were hints of things, but the sister’s first chap could have read fine without the brother’s. Bobbi’s starting out as fun and devious, while her brother is starting off duller than my own personal life. There’s still a lot of multi-perspective promise here, so we’ll see where this goes …
April 13, 2019 Update:
I must admit, Budda’s side of things is still far less interesting that Bobbi’s. It is interesting to see his perspective — knowing what Bobbi is doing, but he’s still really dull. What is interesting, intentionally subliminal here or no, is how stage hypnotists will point out how those that stubbornly think they can’t be hypnotized are probably the easiest to hypnotize. Budda stubbornly keeps thinking subliminal messaging does not affect him that much, when they probably are. This is also literally aligned with my own actual learnings in psychology and overall social science: it is not necessarily that hard to influence people if you know what you are doing. I always like to say that doing what your boss is asking of you is the lightest level of hypnotic suggestion, because you are literally following another’s will. I’m not gonna lie, Bobbi’s side of things is a lot more fun. Things are moving along enticingly …
April 20, 2019 Update:
I must admit, Budda’s resistance to it all sometimes seemed a bit much in the sometimes overwhelming concept of MC erotica, but it was probably not unrealistic. Oh, and yes, Budda’s side of things was finally quite engaging! I think Bobbi might have misread him a little, but its doubtful the truth would really displease her. The addition of a third perspective really does twist this game of perversion in unexpected ways! A slow burn thus far, but now certainly an engaging ride …
May the 4th, 2019 Update:
This has been a very disarming story, for lack of better words. That is a very good thing, because that really should be the primary goal of shifting perspectives in stories. Even attempting to derive the true reality can become futile, but can also be part of the twisted fun. More so than ever, as far as we know, we see the true face of Budda, and its more clear than ever, probably, that he and his sister are perfect for each other. Kacy’s turning into a really great character as well. OK, maybe tickle fights are kinda more silly to me than erotic, but things moved forward from there to more than what we were waiting for.
May 11, 2019, Update:
As had been the case for the last couple updates, things are moving forward. It’s especially remarkable how things flipped between Bobbi and Budda, yet perhaps not at all. Between the lines, well, perspectives, we are slowly coming to understand who these characters are. The apparent trio here certainly seems perfect for each other, but there are apparent barriers they all had to break through, whether that be a mask or understanding what was behind that mask. Or perhaps they twisted each other and themselves to be not quite what any of them expected. We will surely know the full truth soon enough.
May 18 2019
Things are still moving along here. Maybe getting a bit mushy, but I really like how Kacy’s/Kitten’s and Budda’s relationship is evolving. Kacy and Bobbi’s relationship is even hotter. They are really hot together, and the thought of Bobbi really joining them soon is really hot. Sure, Bobbi clearly did not expect the monster she released in Budda, but she also didn’t expect liking it so so much! Messed up and wild story.