Mar 22 ’14 EMCSA Update

WITHIN: Graded primarily on heat and narrative
WITHOUT: Graded primarily on narrative
Possible spoilers below …

WITHIN
BXBI (mc mf gr) (new)  by Kotep
–3/5 (decent, not perfect)–

I don’t mind the occasional bimbo tale, if only for the TF. Seemed a bit straight forward and convenient, but polished, nonetheless. Can’t say it seriously pushed my buttons, but I did enjoy this lightly written piece.
(ReReadability: low / follow: no)

Femdom Hotel (mc mf fd ft) (new)  by Mr. Scade
–3/5 (decent, not perfect)–

Maybe a little outside my tastes, given the title, but fantasies becoming reality looked interesting. Besides, Mr Scade can do some really great work I may bot like BDSM as heat, but this was well polished narratively. A finely written story, even if most of the heat wasn’t for me.
(ReReadability: low / follow: no)

WITHOUT
Saving My Marriage (mc mf) (new)  by Jess Incognito
~~2/5 (so-so, maybe a good story to others but didn’t mesmerize me)~~

Brain implant? Ok, I’ll bite! Definitely shows some polish, but the characters are unlikeable from the start. Starting at such a whiney note will never pull me into a story. Also, seeing children pop up in this context is never something I like. Interesting idea, but the story just wasn’t presented in a way that meshes with me.
(ReReadability: Low / Follow: no)

RANDOM COMMENTS
Mostly continuations this week. Interesting.