Feb 14th 14 EMCSA Update

WITHIN: Graded primarily on heat and narrative
WITHOUT: Graded primarily on narrative
Possible spoilers below …

WITHIN
Kurs Uv Da Ware-Bimbo (mc ff) (new)  by J. Darksong
–3.5/5 (good, not quite earth shattering)–

It’s not secret I don’t mind the occasional bimbo tale, albeit ones not too extreme. Kinda neutral on the name dropping of an actual movie. Couldn’t think up your own name for a zombie action flick?  The writing was more than polished, and flowed nicely. Maybe a bit too silly from the start with a lot of exposition, but this was written lightly enough to make that palatable. To nitpick, it’s true that “Lycanthrope” can generally mean a human acting like an animal, but it literally means “wolf man.”  I kinda wanted Candace to have done this to herself a la Jekyll and Hyde, but oh well. What made up for that was how Candy actually understood what was going on, even if all she really wanted was sex! My real complaint is how we were kind of left hanging. There was mostly tease and TF for heat, and we really don’t get to see the ware-bimbo in action, let alone her transforming Rebecca into Becky.
(ReReadability: low / follow: no)

Reina Returns Home (mc mf ff) (new)  by Lisa Teez
–3/5 (decent, not perfect)–

The writing was definitely polished, while in its own style. I oddly wasn’t pulled into this at first, and I think that was at least partly from how Reina’s slutty nature was too in your face. Took maybe a bit too long to get going, too, this being a longer piece, but once it did, this took a turn for the weird real fast! A good head trip, albeit a bit overlong. My biggest complaint is that I’m not 100% sure what happened. I was left a little confused … 
(ReReadability: low / follow: no)

WITHOUT
The Hive: Erinn (mc mf md) (new)  by Patrick27
~~4.5/5 (very good, all but orgasmic)~~

This looked quite interesting, so I though I should give this a go. The polish was definitely there, and read quite smoothly. It meshed with me quite well. This was greater than the sum of its almost simple parts, as every element of the narrative simply worked. May have lost a bit of gas near the end, but I greatly enjoyed this.
(ReReadability: high / Follow: yes)

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