Sept 7 ‘013 EMCSA Update

WITHIN: Graded primarily on heat and narrative
WITHOUT: Graded primarily on narrative
Possible spoilers below …

WITHIN
Binders Full of Women (mc ff) (new)  by Mudak
–3/5 (decent, not perfect)–

The story may be fiction, but that line actually happened! To play devil’s advocate, the line in context is far less silly. To play myself, why didn’t I think up a story based on that silly line made by a rich, unlikable douche? Anyway, written well enough from the start. Nothing particularly new or different here. While I’m not sure how I feel about the author name dropping here, it’s perfectly readable.
(ReReadability: low / follow: no)

Hot to the Touch (mc ff mf gr la) (new)  by Limerick
–3/5 (decent, not perfect)–

I must admit this seemed a bit too ridiculous and overblown to me, bordering on the nonsensical. I assume this was meant to be comedic, but as always, unexplainably, the humor in the MC backdrop is utterly lost on me … The TF shrouded eroticism, for the most part, did not pass me by, though. Still, maybe I didn’t read clearly enough, but I was a little confused as to what Sammy became. Did she become some kind of succubus? Some kind a demon? A wet fever dream come to life? If she was a mix of all the virus strands, then why was it not clear that exhibited them all in some way? All I was sure about was that she was NOT a cow. Too ridiculous for any serious enjoyment.
(ReReadability: low / Follow: no)

WITHOUT
Hips, Not Eyes (mc mf fd) (new)  by Hypno_me_please
~~2/5 (so-so, maybe a good story to others but didn’t mesmerize me)~~

Can’t say I was pulled into this in any serious way. We already knowing this is about hypnosis based MC, perhaps this could have had the first paragraph suggest that Sandy had more dimension than just hypnotizing people for her pleasure … Ultimately, not too much to this, let alone new or different. Hypno purists may get some enjoyment out of this.
(ReReadability: Low / Follow: no)