WITHIN: Graded primarily on heat and narrative
WITHOUT: Graded primarily on narrative
Possible spoilers below …
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Assvertising (mc mf md) (new) by Hypnobubbles
–2/5 (so-so, maybe a good story to others but didn’t mesmerize me)–
I must admit, as a side note, this kinda follows my argument toward women in porn and modeling: who are the ones getting paid? Anyway, it’s well polished, while there wasn’t too much here of interest to me. I should note that by the time I got to review this a second chap was thrown up, so I went ahead and read that, too. Regardless, no serious surprises here, but like I said, it was well polished.
(ReReadability: low / Follow: no)
Dolldream (mc md ft) (new) by Mr. Scade
–3/5 (decent, not perfect)–
Maybe that synopsis is a bit overlong, I don’t know … 
Very well polished, and quite visual, for lack of better words, for short form. This read very much like a poem, while the intro was indeed one. Not a bad thing, it being done well here. Though, I must admit that the charm of the style did wane a bit for me as I read through. No serious heat in this etherial piece, but like I said, well written.
(ReReadability: low / follow: no)
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Wiped (mc mf md) (new) by Heavy_B
~~2.5/5 (not great, had some redeeming qualities)~~
Very straightforward hypno peice. It is a theme the can grab me, but there usually has to be something more for me to really enjoy it. This one is really just for the hypno purists out there.
(ReReadability: low / Follow: no)
RANDOM COMMENTS
Objectification? But who’s the one getting paid?
The Realms of Mr. Potestas 