**Dolls (mc ff gr in fu) (1 new chapter) by Leigh Malheur**
–4/5 (pretty good, not perfect but enjoyable)–
Though the disconnect between the first two chapters was a bit disorienting, I’m greatly enjoying this story thus far. The physical transformations are just mind blowing. I patiently wait for what’s next!
Original Review of Chap 2:
I must admit the writing of this chapter makes it very odd and different, but not necessarily in a bad way. Any dislike of that oddness was overrode by the great narcissism! And I happen to like sister/sister incest. Not really into the “ownership” element, though, while what appeared to be name changes made things a little hard to follow at first. Still, great heat, and the blatant transformations were very interesting! While not at all what I expected, this was enjoyable.
(ChapReadability: moderate / chap: 2)