**Genie in a Bottle (mc mf md) (new) by TelePhoto**
~~4.5/5 (very good, all but orgasmic)~~
This was quite good, and I’m very glad I read it. There was some great twists to the fantastical themes presented, while the ending was truly amazing! A great one shot for anyone looking for both Vampires and Genies!
Original Review:
Though definitely polished, the themes felt rather old and tired at first like in Hunter. The twist of the guy being a vampire did liven things up luckily. It got progressively better from there, and wasn’t quite as predictable as I anticipated. Maybe this could have been deeper, but it had been exactly what it was meant to be. In spite of the start, this turned out to be a very good romantic fantasy.
(ReReadability: High / Follow: yes)
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