WITHIN: Graded primarily on heat and narrative
WITHOUT: Graded primarily on narrative
Possible spoilers below …
WITHIN
Grope Therapy (mc mf ff md in) (new) by The King of Hearts
–2/5 (so-so, maybe a good story to others but didn’t mesmerize me)–
Not particularly pulled in at the start, but I kept going. I find nothing enticing about an argument over the manner of dress, especially if they are neither working nor going for an interview. So I skimmed most of that. Indeed, I would have just lopped off that first part. I continued to skim a bit after as well, due to the overall length and lengthy exposition. In the end, I really wanted to like this (FF, IN), but I just couldn’t get into it …
(Readability: low / Follow: no)
Roaming Canvas (mc fd ma ft ex ds rb) (2 new chapters) by Mr. Scade
–3/5 (decent, not perfect)–
I must admit that chap 8 seemed strange and out of place. A guy wearing a dress just doesn’t do it for me on all heat levels, while the narrative surrounding it wasn’t spectacular, except maybe for the final moments. It still wasn’t surprising considering earlier developments. Now on to chap 9! Back on form paragraph one, luckily. The gear switch to storyteller was a little awkward at first, but I went with it. That sudden gear change did shift the narrative to something a bit less interesting to me, however. The stories were overall fine, while I must admit that I’ve never been involved in a storytelling session of the kind here. Might have been a better score if it wasn’t for chap 8, and if the shifts were smoother overall.
(Chaps ReReadability: low / Chaps: 8+9)
WITHOUT
Foot Slaved (mc mf fd ft) (new) by nadiencendia
~~2/5 (so-so, maybe a good story to others but didn’t mesmerize me)~~
Feet may be my thing, but slavery … This author and their reader’s pics was one of the reasons why I got into this MC erotica thing, so I always go out of my way to review these. Of course, my interests veered in different directions perhaps even before I started reading. Anyway, I must admit that this story was more than familiar. The themes were far from new, while it seemed a total rehash of the author’s prior story At My Ex-Girlfriend’s Feet. Total déjà vu 
! An ex-girlfriend, or in this case, a would be ex enslaves the guy with the help of her tasty feet. No frills, no thrills; kinda disappointing …
(ReReadability: low / Follow: no)
RANDOM COMMENTS
Depending on the mythology, a Succubus would likely have little trouble having Thanksgiving Dinner with her Human lover’s family, while the awkwardness may be devastating for a Vampire. “Err, we saved the turkey blood for you, if you’re interested …”
The Realms of Mr. Potestas 
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