9/8/12 EMCSA Update

Possible spoilers below …

WITHIN
The Coming  (mc ff mf md fd gr in) (new) by   Homealone_447
–3/5 (decent, not perfect)–

OK, everyone knows I’m not into enslavement heat-wise, so I obviously turned a blind eye. As a side note, reading Childhood’s End tells me that there is a whole other option not mentioned here to conquer the world. Anyway, this was well written, but it didn’t feel all that fresh. Alien invader from meteorite lands in a generic American town? Save us resurrected Steve McQueen! While perhaps overlong and perhaps degenerating a little too much into something not unlike Invasion of the Body Snatchers, not a bad genre piece.
(ReReadability: low / Follow: no)

Fantasy League  (mc mf gr) (new) by   Lisa Teez
–2.5/5 (not great, had some redeeming qualities)–

While the writing was polished well enough, I had trouble understanding this guy’s motives. I guess he was some kind of genie, maybe? It was an interesting theme, I must admit. However, it did seem to be a one trick pony. Wished they had bigger breasts, bigger ass, etc; wish is granted, long live Jambi! No real heat other than some transformation. There’s likely gonna be more, but the first chap at least didn’t have that much happen …
(ReReadability: low / Follow: no)

WITHOUT
Motivated  (mc mm) (new) by   Wrestlr
~~2/5 (so-so, maybe a good story to others but didn’t mesmerize me)~~

To pun, the minimal amount of stories this week has motivated me to actually do an MM story … OK, here we go … Now that’s just a silly disclaimer. If you’re gonna do a disclaimer, at least have that serious … Anyway, this guy has some serious psychological issues relating to his sexuality (obviously bi). This guy directly says he just wants to fuck pussy, while at the same time he’s getting rock hard by watching men wrestle each other? [FREUD’S HEAD EXPLODED!] It is explained, though it was amongst a kind of heat I’d rather live and let live, if you know what I mean. From the start, I just hated this guy. This guy was WAY too obsessed with himself and men wrestling each other. In the end, overlong, and completely not my thing.
(ReReadability: Low / Follow: no)

RANDOM COMMENTS
I’ve recently realized how much I don’t like too much resistance to an inevitable transformation. That’s probably why I don’t write about vein resistance to a serious extent, or at least not have such character jump off a cliff once they realize they have no control over the situation they despise!